"Honey Bear" Film Opening- The Final Cut

Feedback for the Final Cut

Me and Jared were given some constructive criticism over our version of the opening for Honey Bear, this included things such as needing to change the music used as Bethans singing went flat at moments to a point where it put the viewers focus off of the film, we needed to add a new sound which was a door slamming when my character leaves the bedroom. The framing of our shots weren't as good as they could have been, such as the doorway shot were Shaunagh walks through. This is because the shot lingered for too long and it showed to much of the door and not enough of Shaunagh. Also we need to demonstrate uses of extreme close ups, like when Harry is holding the scissors into Shaunagh's body.