Peer assessment of first cut Foundation Production

We have managed to show the rest of the class mine and Jared's version of the first cut of the opening sequence for the film Honey Bear, and it appears as if we have stumbled across some issues that we must take into account for the next cut.

We have been suggested to change the font used throughout the film so that it appears more original, and we have encountered a problem with the part where we see a photo of Shaunagh; it blurs when the camera zooms in which means that we will all have to sort this out as a team.
Also the pace of the film in general was slow, meaning we will need to cut out certain parts in order to speed things up, and also we need to get the timing of the song used correct as well.