Music Video 2nd Cut and Feedback

Compared to our first cut the 2nd cut of our music video recieved much more positive comments, however it was certainly not free from criticism. An example was the final scene where we see Jared rapping in the school hall with strobe flashlight effects, this was not only tedious but also made harder to see due to the strobe effects, meaning we will need to replace this with something new entirely, we have decided this shall be replaced with a green screen sequence which will look much more interesting. We also need to re-film both sequences with me in due to the lackluster lighting and dodgy camera shots especially in the park where it is hard to see Harry in some of the shots.